Great atmospheric song
It was quite a long time ago than I wrote my last review about one of your tracks but I always keep my eyes on your name on the NG list!
I must say you have great skills and talent on composing dramatic songs and these are really encapsulateing the drama, suffering - this one really brings back a suffering-like feeling. And I think the melody, the repetitive drums and the overlapped strings give these effects - so the songs arrangements are fiting perfectly for what you've created for.
To be honest I cant tell you any ways to improve it - I like it as it is right now. The beginning effect was great by the way and I liked the ending as well.
So great job, 10/10, 5/5 and faved!
Keep up your great work and congrats!