Woah, great!
I think this in fact my favorite thing you have ever submitted to the audio portal! I was thoroughly impressed at the lyrics and it sounds so authentic it's hard to believe it is simply stock loops. The lyrics themselves were very nice as they weren't corny or hard to understand like some other songs you have made. It was great to hear different words being spoken the entire time. I really know nothing about eJay, but am glad it exists to make this. You're truly are getting better with every thing you submit.