It an ok start. It's hard to tell what more you could add, you just have to test things and then see if it fits.
But anyway, I don't like the panning of the synth so very much, and the volume on the beat increases too much at 0:13. The song is really missing something, but for obvious reasons if it's not finished. Another melody for another instrument would be great. I like the sounds in the very beginning. And, um... can't think of anything more right now.
Keep up the great work!
I am making a flash with this audio right now. I think it sounds great. I will upload it to NG when I am done.
Seriously!? SWEET :P. I never thought I would have one of my songs used in a flash, thanks. I can't wait to see the flash! :D I am going to remaster it based on peoples ideas,and I will upload that. If you want to, you can wait until I am done making it sound better then use it. I am workin on that right now :)
You get a 5\5 and 9\10.
I've got to say I absolutely love the intro and what comes in later.
The kick is a bit loud, but the melody makes up for it and it all evens out in the end.
I think you should keep working on it and make it into a sort of fast trance or techno song, whatever genre you prefer.
I will be waiting for the finished version.
Keep up the good work!
- DJ Xaltz
Indeed the kick is very loud, I am glad you pointed that out! I will be sure to weaken the sound of it a bit when I remaster it.I am really glad you like the song,and I hope to see you rate some of my new ones soon :D.
The intro is a very good idea, I think, but it's a bit slow right after it. You could have some more stuff going on right after the intro, or you could have the current intro come in later.
The techno beats are very good IMO! The crashing thing with the delay sounds good, and the beats roll on well.
The lead is alright too.
Good luck with building on this song, it mos def has some potential!
Yea,I would have to say I got pretty lucky with the intro, but sadly couldn't carry on the beat of it very well. I will be sure to remaster it so it sounds alot better,thanks for the review :D.
Repaying the favor.
Pretty sweet. Did think it was empty at time though.
Glad you liked it. I will be sure to add some extra sound to it to make it sound even better :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.