Don`t you just like reviews?
Only when they serve a purpose
this may be a possiblity
1st off good work! ok for an ending, try a fade out to all the layers where this version ended but the melody, Wait 5-10 seconds for the melody solo (use the piano for the melody like the begining of this song), then layer by layer fade in at 5 second intervals. after you have the layers together again, keep it up for 10- 30 seconds. then very slowly fade out each layer till it is only the piano and the percussions that are playing. fade out each percussion but the bass as each percussion fades so does the piano but make it a very slow. so now everything dissapeared the only thing that should be heard is the bass echoing to a close but be sure to make it very short(some how you would have the piano playing 3 times in this song where it ends and begins is your choice)
i hope this helped and if you need any more ideas i can always help. keep up the good work!
Yes, this helped a lot! Thankyou so much
I kinda got to a stage where I just didn't know what else to do, I got stuck lol.
Your review is very deep (Which is a good thing) and I'll have to try and figure out all the stuff you're trying to explain =D.
I'll give it a shot and try to keep you informed if I figure it out and change it.
Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!