Once more, good job.
I tried singing some lyrics to this, soft and just impromptu, and I thought it fit pretty well. I don't know what direction you're heading in, or what you want them to be about.
You have a really great melody going on here, but to make it more hip hop-ish you could probably add more of a beat with more kicks and hats and stuff
title explains it all.
i have to agreewith shadowscythe, this isnt really hiphop, altough you can hear certain elements of it in the midlle.
but i just give a 10 because this is really good,smooth,calming,....
overal : nicely done!
PS: do not add vocals, i think the song is much better this way!
It sounds more like Ambient than Hip Hop. It's pretty calming actually. Regardless, nice work.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.