Let's be honest. This one has potential, maybe a little, just a bit, repetitive. I don't know, the beats need kinda work. Don't take me wrong I do like it but what I like is
from time 1:20 forward. Adding a softer and faster piano as well as some improvements with the sounds on the time 0:40 - 1:20 would help a bit. Keep it up!
8/10 & 4/4 on this one, that's like a B+!!!