I like it...

...but i still think that the previous version was a little better in the beginning because that second instrument that comes in is like a pitch off and then it just stops at like 0:53 and it didn't really suit my tastes. I think that the ending was really good though, just end it a different way...because it still feels like the end was missing something. try reversing a cymbal or something @ the end. Great job, really liked the sound of this, just try re-editing these things and this song will be great :D

-gamerworld14