Hehe. First off, Welcome to the world of Fruityloops!
You're right it does have an odd but compelling theme to it. I like you dude. You got imagination and a hell of a lot of potential. Your other music shows you have a good grasp on FL's functions. You remind me of how I was when I first started off. Keep it up man. Just a few things though.
1. Be careful when using phasers and flangers, make sure theyre not to dominant, it just doesnt sound good.
2. Dont EVER put electric guitar in trance music. ESPECIALLY the Fruity Slayer.
3. And finally, don't ever let anyone say your not good enough.
Got on my nerves...
...the beat is 2 slow to carry such an amount of base. The kick is 2 loud compared 2 the other instruments. And... It's kinda monotone :p
i fixed it:) but i don't get why the score of the remix is lower than the original:S:S