it was okay i guess, the intro was really good, but then it all declined from there.. First off your envelope for your synth was off so it made that loud beep that you prolly didnt want, also the melody didnt fit the intro at all, felt like the song was skipping a part, also when you tried to vary the kick, it was off-time and kinda made it awkward.
Its only a demo
I only working on it for like 5 hrs at max
I plan on making this a master piece
so thanks for you review