I liked the sound and the synth sounds. And like people have already mentioned: this would go well with an animation similar to the story. Has kind of a "robocop" feel to it. Futuristic. The story suited this well. Nice job.
And the city noises were a really nice touch.
Hmm, I've never seen Robocop... but the song kinda mix some futuristic sounds and old primitive sounds. Have you seen "The Stranger Forest" here on NG? This song could maybe fit into something like that.
I absolutely loved it! The story to it was perfect as well, and i really hope someone picks this up and does a flash for the story, or perhaps you will..?
and the wierd synth thing was perfect. Don't change that for NOTHING.
If you did, it would totally ruin the song and whole vibe.
you did well with everything
and even the title added to the feeling and emotions played through the music
great work! :D
Wow! Thanks a lot! I'm really glad you liked it that much. And I won't change anything. I promise :D
I liked the storey behind it.
Some odd synths. Some of the higher notes I THINK could of been left out. Lol caps =D
Good job overall... I'm so tired. otherwise you would of gotten a better review...
OK. Thanks for your vote AND review :D
Creative, that's for sure
Wow... I thought I was the only person going to upload a story-inspired song today, and that mine was unique (about watching clouds in a colorless world). Wrong, as usual. This is pretty creative, the story and the song. I don't really like, the main synth, but that's just because it's different. There's really nothing wrong with it. It definitely sounds like a modern tribal dance, which I like no matter what the sounds are. I like that you brought the crowd ambience back into the song before it was over - many people just use ambience as an opening and forget about it. Anyway, good job dude and keep up the good work.
Thanks a lot man! The crowd thing was nothing I added until the song was nearly done. But I'm glad I did that. :) Now the song kinda breaks the city noises, stay for a while just to fade away again.
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your review!