Ooo Nailed it.
It sounds great actually, though it would sound better with work as you said. I love how eerie and interesting it is. And you have a climax! Most songs fuck that part up. Go get that music pc! And hey, I live in Antarctica... Blame parent travelers. I get to see stupid little penguins blubber about.
thanks for the review
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