sounds kinda like pendulum's acoustic stuff (check out their song "9000 miles" for an example if you havent already) i'd suggest a little more beef in the drums
Good song, but it ain't Jazz.
Somehow in your attempt to write a Jazz song you've written a New Wavey Police song, except with less interesting drums, but Sting's not singing, so that basically makes it the best song ever.
the opening is beautiful
this one has a nice serene feel which is very nice to hear in dnb (or at least i think so), its really catchy which i like as well, the only advice i could give is that the section at about 50 seconds lasts twice as long as it should and if a listener isn't basking in the melodic glory then they might get bored with that bit, although im sure the electric piano will be enjoyable for anyone (its epic), the transition from that to the guitar part though sounds awkward and the guitar seems slightly too harsh, i say this but I'd have no idea how to fix this...
this review has been mostly negative but this piece is very very nice (can't wait for your cd!)
lush to say the very least
id like to hear this song completely finished, keep this sound its awesome
not bad 0.0
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