The muffled aspect of it brings it down.
I liked the tone of it and how you synced the sounds together, but it felt like the drums lacked power in that crescendo toward 1:30. Take care of that and this one's golden.
Reviewing as I go:
So the beginning is nice, I like the guitar part.
Heres the drums, but they sound very sampled, and I'm noticing everything is sounding very muffled.
That said, Its a very interesting drum beat
Ah, now I see why they sound sampled, you were going for a glitch style, cool.
I really like all the little harmonies everywhere.
Really the only critism I have with this peice is the very muffled sound of everything, I thought it was intentional at first, and that the guitar was going to fade in, but it never happened. So if you take care of that, I think you have a great song!