Not that great
This was kind of a cheesy submission, but I have definitley heard some worse. I think the main problem with this is that it is hard to create something poignant to the listener. It seems like just one instrument was used and there are so many other things that used tons of instruments. I did think this lived up to what you were trying to do. I could recognize the music. It seems like this would have worked better as a video to show off to another website than as an audio submission here.
This was at the bottem of the barrel, and I can sort of see why, but I will say one thing in this song's defense: It's recogniseable. The ones below this are not recogniseable as Mario theme. The guitar REALLY needs to be worked on, though.
-- Try to hit to hit hit all of the right notes at the right times before recording...
that beat was perfect
but the guitar killed my ears and this song.
i thought it was gunna be good, but then you played guitar,
oh....sorry... my head just exploded
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.