Argh, it's, 3 loops submitted in a row and one of them actually turned out this bad. Epic maneuver. This just cant compare to the final product of shadow sky and barely matches up with your other loops this year, it's just a notch above your oldest songs of 2007.
It's okay-ish, it loops real good, the beat changes, the background and the instrument that takes over with a new melody at 15 something is good but the main melody which you always seem to make so amazing is simply not there. It feels repetative without even looping once and follows one beat (1-2-3-4 1-2-3-4) moving around the scale after each repetition, the end goes like this (1-2-and-3 1) and then well loops. I guess I just took a good melody being there for granted. Or!!! You just need to avoid making loops, get devoted to your craft, make real songs not these loops as listening to 3 loops is apparently my limit.