The recording quality wasn't that great, but it sounded ALOT better when the drums kicked in.
I really liked the whole idea of it and the kinda creepy way it was sung.
The only thing that needed fixing up was the first half of the recording, it just sounded like it wasn't edited properly, idk
Im flattered that you liked it enough to add lyrics to it though and Im looking forward to more submissions from you :D
I didn't really do all that much editing... if any. I just grabbed my camera, recorded with that, and ripped it from the video and overlayed after making sure it fit properly. I'll probably redo it because I was sick and trying my damnedest not to cough.