That was pretty cool, but I agree with the guy who reviewed before I did. It needs more build up, but it needs to stay "loud" for a little longer. I mean, what you did here is not nearly bad, because I rather enjoyed this soundscape, and so much so I'm putting it on my iPod =D
Just keep working on it, and also you have an awesome user name (it means a lot to me, trust me)!
It Was Pretty Good...
It was worth downloading.
I enjoyed it and i thought the only thing you could improve on is more build up in the song.
(to me it sounded like a build up was coming on and when it started to get intense it got quiet again)
You did a good job though!
Thanks! We will keep that in mind for next time!