Yep

I agree with IndieDance all the way, the intro is too long. There wasn't really any need to start the synth pad off that soft. If you started it quicker the atmosphere of the song would have been fitting.Also the kick isn't strong enough try increase the volume and velocity of it. When all the sounds come together it is fairly good, although slightly repetitive. The outro was slightly abrupt but still good enough.
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start it up faster

good =] i liked it, just start it up faster, stonger. MUCH stronger kick.

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other then that nicely done i like it.

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