good buildup, although bringing it in percussion loop melody loop percussion loop style is pretty cliche.
for your first shot at vocals, it came out pretty well.
make the percussion more dynamic. you gotta pan it out more, it's all scrunched up in the center.
thanks for the advice
i agree the beat needs more "spread"
we're gonna go back and sort stuff like that out at a later date
You shouldn't fate the percussion, as it sounds awful, to be honest. Has a REALLY cool beat feeling to it. You definetly know how to build up a song. Nice melody.
Kinda depressing name :/
- DJ Corn
yeeeh, but we thought it was a cool vocal hook
its more saying, oh look theres more to the tune
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.