one suggestion

might want to make a bit more up beat like Club dragonX but this is good too! 9/10 1/5... just kidding 5/5

Nice work!

I like this one better than Dragon Club, this one is better done! I like teh melody alot, but there seem to be some notes off key. Other than that, this is sounding pretty cool. Like the hi-hats too. The bass is also pretty 1337.

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Agreed.

There is an off-key note or two in there somewhere. It bothers me just a tad
But as for your drum beat, it's magnificent.
Keep up the good work sir.
Hope to hear the full song soon =]

music theory?

i just want to know if you know anything about music theory? serious question, because there is this one note that sounds out of key and does not sound so great. read up on key signatures and whats the difference between a major key and minor and the whole pattern between minor and major. if you get that down then none of your melodies will sound out of key if you know about keys.
keep it up.

Pretty good!

Actually this si pretty good, but i dont like the instruments (im kinda racist against them) i dunno why. I just don't like the sound of them. But good potential. The drums rules! :D