Fox-Donut is right
the drums are very unrealistic and quiet. I am also a drummer. For ideas on beats you could check out my song Me Drumming #1. The synth that comes in at 1:06 is a bit outof time. The guitar was very very nice. The hihat at about 1:40 is definitely out of time. You need to work on your drums. The melody was its saving grace and was completely awesome tho. Guitar Solo smooth and well structured Good Job, but needs improvements.
When I made this, i'd never played a drumset seriously in my life. Now I'm a decent drummer, and I agree. The beats suck. The hi-hat is on the second beat of the measure, for one. Part of the problem too is acoustica beatcraft. That's the program I used for this and I gotta say, it's pretty limited. Good for metal(sometimes) but not much else.
When I made this, I was just trying to make it sound like the original, because I like it so much. Seeing as i've failed to do that twice, I guess I'll stick to either my own stuff, or if I do a cover, make it more my own than try to imitate somebody else. : /
maybe if i wasn't a drummer...
drums need work. A LOT of work, they ruin the song actually. I think you should redo the drums then resubmit again lolz, otherwise great.... its just something about that hi-hat.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.