Very Awesome. I like the whole mess of things, and it almost sounds organized. Good job. :)
Thanks! It was a wonky good time!
I'm sorry man, It doesn't sound very tight.
It sounds as though you have just hit random notes in no particular order.
I would suggest mastering it a bit, like fixing up the kick, tweak a few volume knobs etc.
Although I must say, Its got an alright beat =)
I hope this review gives you something to work on and goodluck in future projects