The main bass needs work...
The main bass right from the intro sounds detuned a bit. and might also need some more beats or something to help make it blend in with the rest of the song. other than that, nice job.
ill agree with VVV him
yes it needs a bit more umm melody i guess but as soon as i heard the bass coming i knew it was awesome nice job
Hmm ok a lil help from MEEEE
First of all you get a 5/5 from me and a 8/10 hah.
It needs more of a melody to it. It is a bit repetitive and needs a bit more work. May be good also if you added a bit more EQing in there or even added more effects to the song. Its not bad and i can see this turning into something great.
Keep on it!
a fhew more effects a pad ore 2 and mostly its great but there's fhew moments were its goes 2 simpel and its starts 2 suck
8/10 (u will get there)
4/5 (same as above)