not bad style, but the song is overall slightly boring. gmm
keep working at it.
still no computer?
at least I can believe you made all of this yourself.
You are definately good when it comes to creating an intruiging overall sound. I really like that double distorted voice, it complements the instruments perfectly. To bad it's lacking a climax, you could at least add some drums? (and I don't mean beatboxing!)
Still, definately not a top10 song.
MAN your voice is great but....
It is just too bad you didn't fill this song out. You need GUITARS!! and KEYS!!! and REALLY sophisticated drums!!! Put some more work into this man, I am telling you it will pay off, if not with money, it will pay off in your soul. Trust me.
But I LOVE your voice, it is too bad I had to give this a 3.
not sure why you call it rock there are no real instruments. not a great song you have potential to write much better get rid of the cheesey talking and take your time to layer and fill the sound out
to long and your just talking...
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.