at first i was fine with ignoring the poor quality of the recording, but then the melody got repetitive. and then it got more repetitive.
and then you switched to a new melody, which got repetitive really quickly, and then you went back to the first repetitive melody.
the melodies are nice, don't get me wrong. however you need to mix it up, throw in variations and new chords, play with the tempo and liven it up. even if your chords are pretty, constantly banging away on the keys will make even the most beautiful notes become a chore to listen to.
sorry if my critique was a bit harsh, just tell you how i see it.
Not harsh at all... this is really a very rough cut. I'd like to do a multitracked version.
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