This is pretty coolio I likey. You should continue working on this one, it's got a nice beat too it. Could use improvement though. 9/10 5/5 cause of the beat and how nicely everything fits in.
you've got potential
everything's decent. if i might recommend certain things:
complicate it: use more samples for your percussion
stay on key: the keys that come in later are off key and too discordant, to the point of becoming annoying
use FX: as it is, it sounds very flat and bland. FX are there to spice up your track
use transitions: simply bouncing from one loop to the next is dull and boring, use dynamic mixups and breakdowns to increase the dynamics of your track
all in all, this reminds me of my old stuff, which is why i've bothered writing such detailed feedback. feel free to IM me for help if you'd like, cuz you've definitely got potential.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.