Normally I don't bother with things that top the list in any category because they're always freshly submitted and only have good scores because their first vote(s) was/were high, but this was actually pretty good. The melody just wasn't very immersive, although it wasn't repetitive which was awesome. The part around 02:40 was a bit high-pitched and annoying for my tastes. Maybe it's just these headphones (which aren't the best I admit), but it didn't seem like there was hardly any bass and I think this really would have benefited from a strong bass back-beat. So, overall, a decent work. Good job.
Cool thanks, I'll try to make a better version if I can.
I do have a version where that part isn't as high as it normally is, but, theres other parts that screwed up... soo... still needs some work.