i dont know what program youre using but try using more intruments as well as holding back some of those dynamics from whatever kind of intrument you're using to play that main melody. also try thinking about the chord you're in before adding alot of notes to the melody. i feel like some of the notes are off. but in any case. its more well put together then A LOT of the junk found on this site. keep it coming.
Thanks a lot. Yeah I was driving towards more of just a constant low bass line rather than tonality. I will.
Nice tune, weird instruments...
I like the actual song, its just the intrument(s?) sound a bit weird and kinda screechy, i think it could do with more strings or percussion, not just the melody... still a cool tune so 8/10 from me =)
Yeah I've been getting that a lot. Thanks, though. I tried reverb. before and it didn't really get positive reception. So I just reverted back to the old one. I'll work on it, though, and thanks again.