What FlashMXDude said..
Lol wrong account :D soz
Good work keep up the effort, boredom usually gets you far in songs but you have to make sure you know what you're doing :D
Not too bad.
Overall you put a lot of effort into it. Although I can hear lots of parts of the melody that's way out of tune, such as 1:31 and 1:41, the melodies that you introduce at those two times have lots of mistakes in the notes. If you stick to a certain scale, it helps HEAPS when putting together a complex melody. Also the percussion sound at 0:41, I forget what it's called, but its the wooden sound. It doesn't fit everything else that's going on around it. That sound is good when it's in a breakbeat or an introduction, partnering with other fx percussion sounds but I wouldn't say with a synth/lead. Hope this helps.
Good work, keep up the effort. 3/5 7/10
My biggest challenge is tuning. My hard of hearing kills it and I've been trying to work on getting pieces to correspond by changing a bit of tune to make things more melody friendly. All in all, hopefully this was just the mere beginning of more...kind of weird to get back into techno that is >_<
Thanks for the input, going to note it.