As good as it sounds, I can't precisely give any critique on it due to the bad quality.
I am presuming you wrote you recorded this with your Computer's Microphone using Sound Recorder. Nevertheless, from what I could make out of this piece, it was well written.
Bravo to you, don't stop making music!
It sounds like it was captured through a poor quality microphone, but the melody is pretty. I'd like to hear more variety in the compositions you do; this is the only one you have uploaded :P
I had completely forgotten about this! I have added onto the piece, and might record another soon.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.