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hmm not bad

well i cant speak for others but i liked it did you make it yourself? its pretty good sounds like you got a good bit of experience in this kind of stuff

OK..cool (*bobs head to song*)

as Dj-Brand0 said;

1. The kick is heavily repetitive.
2. Can't really see a main melody.
3. Allow more time for transitions between sounds and tunes
4. Have a trance bass in the background instead of a bass kick because it shows you have more skill...

i agree and have more to add to that list...
5. make it longer.
6. turn the bass kick Vol. down a bit

i can see your primary melody tho...its the synth that the song starts with, it just changes part-way through the song..you have no need to do that, keep the same primary synth, tweak it to fit if nessisary, but keep it.

a 4.3/5 and a 9.3/10 from me, i want to see a improved song of this tho!

_-Mach 2-_

things you can improve..

Hey. Here are a few things you can improve.
1. The kick is heavily repetitive.
2. Can't really see a main melody.
3. Allow more time for transitions between sounds and tunes
4. Have a trance bass in the background instead of a bass kick because it shows you have more skill...
That's all I can think of right now. Keep it up! 5/5 10/10

-Cheers Brando