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Author Comments

I'll make an extended version of this one sometime.. Just listen to it. :D


Seems to need a little work.

This song has a very nice beat to it, but it would sound even better if more was added to it. Maybe some really cool lead or something would liven it up a bit. As far as drums and such... man you got that down good, its very nice work. im rating 4 cause i cant resist the beautiful work youve done already :)

please rate me back.

Ravy responds:

Yes, it needs some more "stuff". :P You got that right.

Thanks for your review, I'll check your stuff out too. ;)

not bad

I haven't been one to write reviews, but I feel that it wouldn't hurt any of us song writes to get some feedback. I'm glad to hear a song in this portal that has a drumline more than just a BASSDRUM. I don't know if this is a complete song or not, but I'd suggest putting some more instruments that give the song more color. All in all it's not a bad start. Feel free to checkout my submitions, my favorite are "Oreo Phantom" and "Prisioners Without Chains".

Ravy responds:

It isn't really finished and I'm not that satisfied with the outcome either.. That's why I'll make an extended version.. This is just a little teaser. :D

Thanks for the review! I'll check your songs out. ;)

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Credits & Info


3.33 / 5.00

Jan 15, 2005
3:04 AM EST
File Info
2.8 MB
3 min 0 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.