Seems to need a little work.
This song has a very nice beat to it, but it would sound even better if more was added to it. Maybe some really cool lead or something would liven it up a bit. As far as drums and such... man you got that down good, its very nice work. im rating 4 cause i cant resist the beautiful work youve done already :)
please rate me back.
Yes, it needs some more "stuff". :P You got that right.
Thanks for your review, I'll check your stuff out too. ;)
I haven't been one to write reviews, but I feel that it wouldn't hurt any of us song writes to get some feedback. I'm glad to hear a song in this portal that has a drumline more than just a BASSDRUM. I don't know if this is a complete song or not, but I'd suggest putting some more instruments that give the song more color. All in all it's not a bad start. Feel free to checkout my submitions, my favorite are "Oreo Phantom" and "Prisioners Without Chains".
It isn't really finished and I'm not that satisfied with the outcome either.. That's why I'll make an extended version.. This is just a little teaser. :D
Thanks for the review! I'll check your songs out. ;)