This is good! I don't see how it could have under three stars--
I like how your instrumentation works, it doesn't clash at all, and they definitely make the song more interesting instead of cluttering it up. I can actually hear all the parts at all times--pretty much.
So you put this together really nicely, there's just nothing really really super new I guess. Actually no, maybe that's not it. It is pretty new sounding, but-- AHah, I see.
Dude. If you made the drums more... dance like-- had them stick out a little more.
Yeah it's the drums. keeping this one down. If you worked a little harder on drums, made some of the leads stick out a little more, this would be an awesome song. It REALLY REALLY needs a more followable beat. This would be an awesome AWESOME song if that was there. Nice job.
thanks alot man.
Its not half bad
Your build up is really too slow. But at about 1:14 it becomes a lot better. Your beat doesn't really compliment your song though. I would ask more of a bass boost as well. I would also ask more of a contrast in dynamics during the climax.
ok thanks. This is actually for a flash game promo video, so it corresponds with what is going on in the flash. Try going to like 2:15.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.