needs a lot of work.
This is the second song I've reviewed of yours. What you need to do is make a more appealing beat. I would suggest using some snares, cymbals, and high hats. Songs need a baseline of some sort. Just a bassdrum can't support an entire song. I'd work on making better drumlines. Start off simple and when you feel that you're doing alright at that try being more technical. Also make simple basslines and thing should flow a lot better. Keep practicing man and things will come better together.