Meh.
This is a pretty good song. I liked the melody and bassline and such, but besides the one that starts around 6 secs, you should use different instruments. That includes the drums, too. I actually really liked the melody from 41 to 1:19, but around 1:26, the two parts didn't go together very well. I agree with Michael, though. Nice job on the melody =)
2/5, 6/10.