I like this
First off, I love the transition into 5/4. Its a very brave and bold move if you ask me. I think this has been very well done and very well thought out. Its good stuff!
The only reason that its a 9 for me is I'm not too sure about the first maybe, two bars with just the snare, it sounds sort of out of time to me. Otherwise its absolutely perfect and you should keep it up :)