Nice! But needs a little more mixing
This sounded like if it were cleared up a little it could be really cool. The loudness of the synth kind of distorted everything, making it hard to hear anything but the lead synth.
The break you have in from 34 - 56 seconds was really nice because it was clear. I feel like if the rest of the song was that clear it would be awesome.
Overall nice work, I'd like to hear a cleaner version of this sometime.
9/10 -1 for mixing 8(