THE FIRST NOTE BLEW MY EARS OUT!
Seriously though... you should do something about that first note... I'm wearing headphones... so that was right next to my ear... and now my ear is throbbing.
Otherwise... the song had great potential...
You should really lay off on some of that distortion on the guitar though, also... in a few notes, not all, but a few you have some echo on the guitar... its rather annoying in my opinion.
1:30: Great drums... They really make the song for me.
Also around 1:40 ish you've got some great riffs.
The title is very odd... just thought I would add that in.
So anyways... to conclude this huge review:
I thought I would add that a lot of it was good, but having even the smallest thing that annoys someone can make it a bad song instantly.
At about 3:00 or so. I really started to enjoy it... and raised your star rating from a 6 to a 8.
Thanks, and sorry about the ear-splitting.