Hmmm, it felt like the mastering was cluttered on this track. Instruments and channels were colliding with each other, while this gives is a "full" sound it also hurts its clarity and stereo image. As Sycross said, the drums were spread too far from the center of the stereo image, and the reverb that was on them didn't match the rest of the track. If you cleaned up the mastering and fixed the drums I think that this would be an enjoyable song - keep it up!
Thanks for the review... Yeah, I'm trying to get better at mixing down but it's taking me time to find my way up the learning curve. I got sometime today, I'll go back and see what I can do. Thanks.
my name iz jake o.0....
good song by teh way!
You wanted a review, so here goes:
-The percussion sounds out of tune with the rest of the song, and kinda creates an unpleasant dissonance.
-Might want to take another look at some of your transitions. They are ok right now, but could use some buildup leading into them.
-Enough variation to make non-repetitive.
-Good, rich sound.
8/10, 4/5, Great song, just work on the things I stated.
Look forward to more from you,
Thanks for the list...and your time :).
Yeah I really need to practice with my drums. I really do lack in that area.
You are also right about transitions. The song really doesn't grow, just stays towards the same level.
I will work on it for my next song...
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.