The rythym that goes from 0:14 to 0:27 is very catchy. The bass can be improved & the pad or synth of the beginning & the ending also needs to be removed or changed.
But I liked the concept of the song. If you build this song based on the sound that goes from 0:14 to 0:27, something nice can appear in newgrounds :)
Good luck & keep it up!!
Yeah, I can get a catchy tune... But I usually can't work with it into a progressive song. I might go back to this one.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.