Sorry, being really familiar with garage band this comes across as really boring for me. Besides, you should try your hand at some original composition! You wouldn't believe how many times I've heard these loops.
Anyway, IF you ever find the time, sit down at a piano somewhere and fool around on it. Maybe check out some of GB's built in loop editor, customize these loops and make them your own by tweaking the notes. Figure out what sounds good and what doesn't. Learn the patterns, break the mold.
The thunder sound effect isn't doing it for me either, but that's just a matter of getting a higher quality sound effect.
Keep at it, don't give up, but you're not... really doing it well yet.
You need practice!
Yeah I know this is a tad stale. I didn't even know that GB had a loop editor. Thanks for the response!
I liked this one. Everything is good about it, except for the short length. :-P
Yeah, it seems that I can't make a track last longer the ~1:30. And once again thanks for the comments.
nice clean peace
keep up you good work
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.