I want to hear the finished track, however...
I'm hoping this isn't what the whole song will be made up of.
I see this (once shortened a little) as being a really good intro but I couldn't see it as the makings of a whole song.
Not a bad small piece of music but please reply with what you have in mind for it.
Basically I want to add drums, strings, etc. I want to make it sound bigger, more epic, and more complete. This is a sketch of a song basically. I think that you see it as an intro because there's two instruments, it's short, it doesn't sound full.
That's just my opinion, please reply with what you think.
I also want to add that I see where you're coming from with it being an intro. I will just have to mess around and see what happens, which is what I always do,
If you say so.;-)