sweet song... i love the little jingle riff though out the the whole thing. more songs like this please
Your melody is godly, however i don't like neither the buildup, nor the synths used. That really high sound (I don't know what intrument it is, some kind of bell i guess) is terribly annoying.
Around 2:00, you add an awesome synth. Probably the one i missed early. Really af shame it weren't added earlier.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.