Okay
But need some more buddy.. i liked it.. but yes.. hmm.. again the kick has to much delay.. i would really love to see a remastered version of this!! i say this cuz. this could been done better.. Only for ur own best =) .. Overall: Pretty good..
Hint: try to make a 'C' in 'C4' and then right after a 'C' in 'C5' and keep that going .. then try from 'C' to .. 'E' maybe and then make 'E' in 'C4' and 'E' in 'C5 right after.. after u've made ur 'underbeat' u can make the melody in 'C6'..
That can for example be : 'C' 'E' 'G' 'E' 'G' 'A' and so on..just try to combine it and then at last u can make some changes in the master (F9).. and maybe try to
make some strings (maybe orion string with reeverb and phaser on?) and then u can for example make some long notes like 'C' 'E' and 'G' over 2 steps..
When u have done that press (Alt+a) the apregaitor will open and then u can combine it from there.. sry thats all i have in my mind xD haha...
4/5
Keep it up!
HelthRMX
PS: this was for fl studio =)..