i spaced out (or went into a trance I guess) within the first few seconds of listening xD Guess the song works then!
xD wow =]
thats prolly a good thing, sept this is porlly my worst song ever xD
The melody doesn't really fit that much. Quite an empty song. Try making your melodies just an 8 bar loop or a 16 bar loop that people can tell what the melody is doing. This melody just sounds like a bunch of random notes to me.