First off congrats on your first audio submission. I do think that it was very well done for what you had here. I liked how it started off with the intro and then built up a little bit to the end. I do think that perhaps you could have ended it a bit better, but the rest of the song was pretty good. Perhaps you should start working on the length of your submission now and try too keep the same good quality that this one had.
Overall - Not a bad piece, but it would probably be much better if it was longer. What you had was pretty good though.
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is a little simple but it sounds pretty good, the piano was nice and the rhythm was cool, sound so classical, too bad it's too short... i wish there were more material to talk about and give advices
but for the short part you made, i can tell you that you really have potential, so keep it up with the song and i hope to hear more of your work soon
If you have ever played it, this reminds me of the music in the game banjo kazooie - and that was a good game. Similarly, while this is a short piece of music, I enjoyed it allot, nice use of instruments - good progression. Keep up the good work.
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Acceptable I suppose
It could have been so much longer and better than just this. It just feels like a really pointless loop to me with nowhere to go towards in the end meaning you're basically going in circles and the ending came off as far too weak since the music kind os cuts off 2 seconds before the audio is over. Overall this could have been far, far, more better and much, much longer.
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