we're making more decent now

you are much better now =D

Helth
5/5

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well you discovered by yourself what it was missing :(... well at least I can say Its catchy, as got a five and ten score, and as been fav ^^

its not bad.

I think its just missing something all together. I can't say what off the top of my head (and trust me i've listened to this for a bit before i figured out what felt strange to me about this) Its got a pretty happy sound but at the same time it reminds me of a sigh of releif. hmm.. Not bad what so ever keep it up!

Wyldfyre1