an ok tune, but you really need to work on your vocals. i do sense potential, but you're kind of restraining yourself, and the vox gets off pitch. but still an interesting style, and the screams work. keep practicing \m/
Normally, I don't review music...
So I apologize if I'm not giving you enough info here. At first, it really seemed like it was going somewhere...then the voice comes in. Sorry, I just didn't like the voice. The beat was nice, the guitar was awesome...but the voice really killed it for me. And yes, normally I'm a fan of death metal.