Needs some work
It is rather short, but I'm going to stay away from that in my review. I didn't really enjoy this submission at all. It didn't really sound like anything and especially didn't make me think of myself sitting at the throttle and waiting to be deployed into the array of lasers and space ships. If anything it made me think of someone falling asleep at the wheel of a car and almost drives into a big rig truck, just to serve into another one. I do admit that it loops just about perfect though.
Overall - Kind of short and doesn't really sound like it would to appeal to many people. Keep up the work though.
~ Review Request Club ~