1) It's nice to give credit where it's due - IE, putting in the author's comment section that the song is deathkllr84's, and that you only did vocals.
2) Speaking of vocals, they need work. Delivery and timing especially. Sound/tonality isn't too bad, but everything else needs some work, including the recording quality.
3) 'open your ur eyes and look aro'? What the hell kind of a song title is that?